How to Write a One Sentence Summary for Films
Writing a Tagline for a Movie Pitch to Submit to Movie Producers
A typical screenplay contains a weaving story, plot twists, several
characters, lots of action and dialogue. When asked to summarise all of these
things in one sentence, the writer might be lost for words. However, many
submission packages required by film agents and producers demand a one-sentence
summary with the screenplay.
What is a One Liner?
A one liner is a single sentence that can be used to sum up a film. The
one liner comes in useful when trying to sell the script to agents or if anyone
asks “what’s the script about?” Writing a summary for a film in 25 words or
less is an exceedingly challenging task. In order to begin thinking about it, a
few things are required:
• A thesaurus
• The synopsis of the film
(if one has been done)
• The genre
• The time period
• The movie’s theme (the
moral of the story)
• The hero’s goal
• Climatic scenes
Conceiving a One Sentence Summary for Pitching a Movie
With the resources described, it is a good idea to seek out powerful,
accurate and evocative nouns to use within the summary. If it is about a
woman’s quest to find her lost brother, explore alternatives for the keywords
within. Search, pursuit, exploration, investigation, inquiry and scout, possess
different shades of the same meaning. Perhaps another noun could be used in the
summarising sentence to compliment or contrast with the others.
Steps in Summarising a Screenplay
The following pointers might also be worth consideration:
• Dynamise the nouns with
active verbs. This will make the summarising sentence more memorable. Verbs
such as scour, probe, pry, rummage and sift, etc, could be used instead of
“find.”
• Make the sentence work
hard by minimising the use of weak words and lazy adjectives. Cut the word
count by using one word in place of two.
• Swap over clauses and
sub-clauses within the sentence to see how it changes the meaning.
The resultant one sentence summary might read thus:
“A woman seeks out her brother after he deserts the army for being
wrongly accused of murder.”
What is a Tagline?
A tagline is the commercial one liner that are displayed on movie posters
and trailers. It is worked from the one liner when promoting the film and serves
several purposes:
• To provide a teaser
• Defines the type of film
it is, for a potential audience (buddy movie, action thriller, etc?)
• To define the film’s
genre
• To provide a hook-line,
that audiences will remember.
An example of a memorable tagline is from Alien (Ridley Scott, 1979) “In
space, no one can hear you scream.”
Writing a One Liner for a Script
Summarising a screenplay in one sentence is an effective way of letting
potential agents and producers get an idea of what the film is about and helps
them decide whether to read the screenplay. Using a thesaurus is crucial in
this process and helps the writer find strong nouns and active verbs to create
a punchy one liner.
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